The first three statements are examples of "weak" thesis statements:
My three most important values are freedom of expression, environmental protection, and universal education.
Important values to me are freedom of expression, environmental protection, and universal education.
I like my family and friends and religion.
Below are examples of strong thesis statements:
Freedom of expression, environmental protection, and universal education are my three most important values, which have shaped the way I see the world.
My values have been shaped by personal experiences and cultural impressions, they guide me through daily life and mainly derive from freedom of expression, environmental protection, and universal education.
Whether I am conscious of it or not at the time, the values most dear to me, freedom of expression, environmental protection, and universal education have played an important role in each decision I have ever made.
what about the last value do we have to write a transition sentence to it?
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